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Alice,It's Tea time. by ~emotoaster:iconemotoaster:

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When the earth crumbles beneath your feet.
Like the spine twisted and cracked.
"Goodnight my little angel."
Broken lights flash up in the sky
When you're freestyling on crack.
Feel the flesh tear from your bone
And scream your until your pallid cheeks turn pink.
Life among bent trees and sugar-coated forests.
Tease with checkered jackets and camo shorts.
Break up her ribcage,take out the heart.
It's high tea time.
©2006-2009 ~emotoaster
:iconemotoaster:

Author's Comments

Ummmmmm...I'll explain:


Like the spine twisted and cracked - I wish I was skinnier

"Goodnight my little angel." - Phil said that to me,it made me happy lol C:

When you're freestyling on crack. - I like MSI

Feel the flesh tear from your bone - I'm giving Seven back the razor he gave me so I can stop cutting

And scream your until your pallid cheeks turn pink. - I'm pretty pale and my face was pink from Sharpie

Tease with checkered jackets and camo shorts. - Ethan wears this awesome jacket and John always wears camo shorts

Break up her ribcage,take out the heart. - Ribcages interest me

It's high tea time. - I like tea,Seven wrote on my sehktual harrasment paper : (the last ones lol)


Harrasment: Flirting:

feels bad feels good

illegal legal

someone stabbing you WEED.









PSSSSSSSSSSSSSSST I'm taking a break for a while,I'll give you yo drawings later *nya*

*i googled the tea pic lol*

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~valkvick Dec 11, 2006, 6:51:58 PM
This poem had a really raw feeling to me...I liked it a lot! Granted that I interpreted it differently than the explanations you provided (which made it make more sense), but I really liked the edge to this poem, and the disjointed flow. Very nice!

--
"A prayer for the wild at heart kept in cages."
~Tennessee Williams
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~emotoaster Dec 11, 2006, 7:08:32 PM
Hey thanks!Yeah,it's kind of...broken poetry heeehee but thanks!
( And for the fave!:hug: )

--
"This is a song about going to JAIL and getting FUCKED in the ASS!!"


-Gerard Way :boogie:
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~maddyheartshoney Dec 11, 2006, 8:24:27 PM
WHY MUST YOU KICK MY ASS AT POETRY!
Haha, nah this is fricken awsome. But wait .. the razor .. you cut? Madddddddddddddddiiieeeeee!

--
"And now, you wanna see how far down I can sink?
Let me go, fuck!"
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~emotoaster Dec 11, 2006, 8:28:00 PM
Lol thanks
haha yeah I'm trying to stop nooooooow
:'D

--
"This is a song about going to JAIL and getting FUCKED in the ASS!!"


-Gerard Way :boogie:
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~La-Vie-en-Rose Dec 11, 2006, 10:02:20 PM
wow, toast thats really good! *tre jealous* i could never write as well as this

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It's a fascinating voyage of pain and despair that leaves you emotionally drained and satisfied, like fucking a burning dolphin
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~Modest-Machina-GO Dec 11, 2006, 10:50:51 PM
Yay for quitting, or even just trying to quit, Maddie McToast! *hugs* And this is a really good poem! some people I think would disagree, but you're a better poet than me!

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~maddyheartshoney Dec 12, 2006, 2:41:56 AM
Madddddiiie :(
Bad! Please stop!

But it's okay. I'm not judging :)

--
"And now, you wanna see how far down I can sink?
Let me go, fuck!"
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~KeyToAfterLife Dec 12, 2006, 4:54:00 PM
Cutting isn't exactly somthing you tell people.

--
-Miss Valerie Hodge
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~talkativestrawberri Dec 13, 2006, 8:45:32 PM
Awsome, awesome, awesome, poem!
And good for stpooing the cutzes. I had to had my craft knife for awhile XP

--
" i think Gee brings random objects to shows in a briefcase or something and goes:
Gee: Hmmmmmmmm....I wonder how epic I can make this egg beater look by dancing with it on stage?"

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